Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.

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are more important than

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before Since phones and text messages were invented, people do not need to rely on letters to keep

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nowadays save much time.

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. Travellers are more comfortable and less tired unlike before when ships and trains were the only ones for travelling and transportation.

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in learning. Students can find quickly on the

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to learn.

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without taking any classes like drawing and cooking. It can reduce the budgets used in those.

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, the essential things about public health are

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used in

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and

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are always updated according to the trend.

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the diseases can be found in

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. In conclusion,

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are vital for

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, the benefits of

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outweigh the benefits of

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