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The average age of the population for many nations around the world has been in decline in recent decades creating a situation where young people have become the world’s largest demographic, particularly in developing nations. Although there are decided drawbacks to this

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Kindly, find the attached conference paper. I have squeezed it to meet the 10 pages maximum criterion in terms of the conference paper
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, the aim of the study, and the heat conduction equation, which is now under the Analytical Model section. 2- Omitted all figures that relate to one of the examined day (26-05-2021), which was in section 2.1 "Parameters Input for the Analytical Temperature Model" and just mentioned the results in the text only.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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