In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In our modern time, it is common for young

people

to

work

and

travel

before attending

university

. From some

people

’s perspective, it is better for the

students

to provide

work

experience and that can lead to better career selection. According

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,

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it is very important for

students

to join the

university

for education.

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essay will discuss both statements

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the following. There are many reasons that encourage young

people

to

work

or

travel

before attending

university

.

First

of all, the

students

could discover what they really like to do in the future.

Moreover

, when

students

work

, they learn to deal with problems in different kinds of situations.

Secondly

, when

students

travel

, they have many opportunities to engage with other

people

and deal with a variety of life situations

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when they go abroad, they have the stressful parts are not knowing anyone, missing old friends, and dealing by themselves.

For example

, the

students

who used to

work

as waiters obtained many skills

such

as managing time and

also

communication skills and

this

would help them perform well when they join the

university

.

As a result

, these experiences assist

students

to solve the problems that they will face once they begin working.

In contrast

, there are some drawbacks to working or travelling before joining the

university

. One of the reasons is

also

possible that they start to like their life outside the school and they may never go back to attend college. And

also

, the working and travelling have to use a lot of

money

to go because that want to hire an agency to provide a lot of processes.

For instance

, most young

people

want to

work

or

travel

in

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overseas

such

as in England but they cannot contact

with

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the company by themselves so they have to spend lots of

money

to hire an agency but sometimes

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useless.

Moreover

,

this

moneymoney

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money money

should use to support education because if

students

attend

university

they will learn the

necessery

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necessary

knowledge for a job in the future. In conclusion, if

students

take a gap year , they could gain invaluable experience.

However

, they may

also

use a lot of

money

for the process to go and

also

spend

money

for attending the

university

is more beneficial.

Therefore

, it is necessary to join

university

for young

people

.