People living in the twenty-first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The invention is been an ongoing process over these years to make the future more relaxing and convenient for everyone

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, it is undeniable, that todays’

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has a far better essence of

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than past centuries but, over the centuries the quality of the environment is decreased. It is irrefutable that, a revolution in many industries made

life

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more and more flexible and time saver than the past times ,

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, the invention of the internet, the discovery of smart mobile phones etc. due to

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technology people can connect to anyone from any corner in the world by just tapping on the screen and convey the messages in some seconds rather than waiting of

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days or months even, in today's education system students can find any details regarding the studies from the website.

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to that, connectivity between rural and urban areas is much better than in the past, resulting in the good construction of roads.

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, these many innovations put

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in danger for

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animals and birds.

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, in current times sparrows are rare to see than in the past because of the mobile tower radiation. In the aim of making

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more accessible people forget about the outcome of that,

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, the level of different pollution is rising day after day. To conclude, modernization made routine

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more accessible through modification and discoveries but the quality of health is falling due to a lack of any actions.

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People living in the twenty-first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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