Increasing offences by juvenile delinquents have contributed to an unsafe environment for
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. Nowadays, it has led to a debate whether minority lawbreakers should be tried in court as adults or treated differently because of their age. I strongly dispute
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idea since these young offenders can be still given the opportunity to reform themselves.
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Firstly
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doing
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due to
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peer pressures and gangs.
Besides
, the violence in the media can attract their attitudes and behaviours. Our young are like a car with a great accelerator, but a weak brake. They do not think before they act. Sometimes, they do not understand what
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right is and what
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wrong is because of their
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, as a consequence, they do the same wrong works again.
However
, their evils should not be forgotten. So, in
this
situation, if we sent them to the teen rehabilitation Centre to learn and teach the social value and anti-corruption lessons
instead
of jail,
then
they may be understood their fault and felt sorry for their misdeeds.
For instance
, a child transgression magazine showed their report that about 75
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offenders came back,
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normal life after their recovery sessions. It is said that bad behaviours are easier to change when a person is
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.
Secondly
, our youth law does not allow putting the pubescent behind the jail, and I believe that trying
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in court may actually outcome in bigger problems. In a cell, there are lots of
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inside there. If we give our youngest, a harsher penalty and put them in these
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,
then
this
prison may expose these kids to a hardened culprit who may act as a professional malefactor.
For example
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code department shows that
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minority wrongdoer who releases the jail makes a lot of threatening
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than those who came to the junior recovery Centre.
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conclusion, we do not get them back
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their normal life.
On the other hand
, those people say that the teen offender must be punished like a man; they believe
this
because many countries pay no full attention to young crimes, for
this
, they become more dangerous than any other felons do.
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in cybercrime, child abuse,
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misdeeds and many
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anti-social activities
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the
last
few years.
Nevertheless
, the junior lawbreakers feel guilty for their misdeeds. For
this
, if they get harsher penalties like older,
then
they realized their faults and
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to break the laws.
Besides
, these treatments will make our civil life safe and peaceful. Much research said that the modified law would change the situation and decreased
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re-offence cases.
To sum up, we should hate transgression, not criminals. Time and adult persons negatively influence
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generation. So that they need proper attention to give up their misdemeanours, not to harsher
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.
This
will curb our crimes.