As more and more information is available online, the role of textbooks has become obsolete. Therefore, universities should replace traditional books with digital materials. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

BOOKS
ARE THE PRECIOUS THINGS IN OUR LIVES. NOWADAYS,IT IS GOING TO VANISH DAY BY DAY DUE TO THE TECHNOLOGY . MOST OF THE THINGS THAT
BOOKS
SHOULD BE REPLACED WITH NEW ADVANCED COMPUTER MATERIALS WHILE OTHERS ARE NOT IN
THIS
FAVOUR. IN MY OPINION ,THE PAPER
BOOKS
SHOULD HAVE THERE FOR STUDY .I WILL
FURTHER
ELABORATE ON MY VIEWS IN THE FORTHCOMING PARAGRAPHS.
FIRST
AND FOREMOST ,
BOOKS
GIVE THE KNOWLEDGE . IT HELPS US TO ENHANCE OUR READING SKILLS AS WELL AS WRITING .
FOR INSTANCE
, WHEN WE READ SOMETHING ,WE COULD REMEMBER SOME WORDS WHICH WE CAN USE WHILE WRITING .
MOREOVER
, DURING SKIMMING THE
BOOKS
,IT CREATES INTEREST THROUGH THE PICTURES WHICH INCLUDES UNDERSTANDING THE TOPIC MORE CLEARLY .
CONSEQUENTLY
,MEDICAL STUDENTS UNDERSTAND THE THINGS VISUAL EVEN MORE .
BOOKS
INCREASE OUR CONCENTRATION . ON THE OTHER SIDE OF COIN , ADVANCED TECHNOLOGY ,
SUCH
AS
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COMPUTERS, LAPTOPS, AND TABLETS ARE EASY TO CARRY .WE DO NOT NEED TO GO OUTSIDE LIKE THE LIBRARY TO FIND OUT
BOOKS
.JUST WITH ONE ,CLICK WE CAN HAVE ANY TYPE OF BOOK IN FRONT OF US .
HOWEVER
,IT DECONCENTRATE THE PUPIL . HAVING INTERNET ONE'S MOVE TO OTHER ACTIVITIES
FOR EXAMPLE
GAMES ,FUNNY VIDEOS AND SO ON .WHICH MEANS CHANGING THE PATH FROM STUDYING . TO RECAPITULATE THE A FOREMOST MY IDEAS DEPICT THAT BOTH PLAY PIVOTAL ROLES IN HUMAN LIFE .TODAY'S ERA IS A TECH-FRIENDLY BUT IT HAS SOME DRAWBACKS. ANCIENT TEACHING TECHNIQUES ARE THE BEST THAT MAKES THE MIND SHARP .
THIS
CONCLUDE THAT PREVIOUS WAYS HAVE MORE MERITS THAN ONESNEW .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay โ€“ it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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