Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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have

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main responsibility for raising their

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to become better people in the

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. While some people argue that education stands a crucial role in

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statement. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of

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issue and give

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details to substantiate my point of view. On one hand, It’s true that

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have a great influence on a child’s development.

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,

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are always present most

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in their life. Since the younger the

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are, the more malleable their character is,

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’s

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and values toward the world are instilled by their

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.

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,

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have a significant impact on teaching their

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well.

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, offspring who come from a prestigious and well-educated family, often lead to a prosperous life in the

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.

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, those from dysfunctional

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often exhibit

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problems after they grow up.

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,

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system

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a relatively impact on the

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as well. School is the place pupils form their belief system. The book they read and the subject they discuss all cultivate

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to grow and form their own

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.

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,

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spend a lot of time at school with their peers.

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is undeniable that what

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provide is inevitable to shape their

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. In conclusion,

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whether

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or schools’ duty to teach students

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better guys in the

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, I believe that both of their efforts play an important role

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children

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’s development in

different

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edge.

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, they should all take responsibility

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the teaching and no one should stand out

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it.