You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it wont happen again.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to offer my sincerest apologies for the loud music the other day. It was not my intention to bother the

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but I was having a birthday party with a

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friends. And during the night we were having fun, the mood was great and with no intentions to provoke you we turned up the music. We didn't realize how loud the music was and completely understand your

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. It is in your

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to complain. I understand how annoying it must have been for you. And wanted to apologise personally for my behaviour. I am really ashamed

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what happened and I promise won't happen again. Please accept my sincerest apologies for any inconvenience. Yours faithfully,

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

122 words

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it wont happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving hapiness.Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with hapiness.Discuss both views.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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