You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it wont happen again.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to offer my sincerest apologies for the loud music the other day. It was not my intention to bother the
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but I was having a birthday party with a
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friends. And during the night we were having fun, the mood was great and with no intentions to provoke you we turned up the music. We didn't realize how loud the music was and completely understand your
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. It is in your
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to complain. I understand how annoying it must have been for you. And wanted to apologise personally for my behaviour. I am really ashamed
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what happened and I promise won't happen again. Please accept my sincerest apologies for any inconvenience. Yours faithfully,
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