You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it wont happen again.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to offer my sincerest apologies for the loud music the other day. It was not my intention to bother the

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but I was having a birthday party with a

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friends. And during the night we were having fun, the mood was great and with no intentions to provoke you we turned up the music. We didn't realize how loud the music was and completely understand your

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. It is in your

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to complain. I understand how annoying it must have been for you. And wanted to apologise personally for my behaviour. I am really ashamed

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what happened and I promise won't happen again. Please accept my sincerest apologies for any inconvenience. Yours faithfully,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

122 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it wont happen again.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

he plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people tend to buy products or get services instantly, without waiting. Why is it happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using mobile phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?