You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to an

article

regarding the people of South Hill and the related areas. basically, I was read the magazine yesterday and pinpointed some mistakes that need immediate correction and attention.

Firstly

, I would like to inform you about the

article

and it was about Health and Saftey page number 8 the summary of that

article

is about the population that prefers to eat Junk Food and eventually resulting in health issues owing to the unhygienic ingredients,

furthermore

the ratio of obesity directly liked with Quick Snack.

however

, it was overall a very informative magazine for folks to provide very crucial resources.

Secondly

, The most essential thing of that piece is the data, chart and graphs analysis used in order to provide maximum awareness

in addition

, the problem was mainly with the data about total population mentioned in the

article

was 54,500 for south hall area but it actual population is 64,500

furthermore

, the gender analysis is

also

not correct in line with the actual ground reality.

Lastly

, I would like to request you to make certain corrections to the

article

and republished it with accurate data on the number of people and gender how many females and males. I would appreciate your immediate attention to

this

matter Yours Faithfully, Shaban Raza