You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. In your letter, ● state what the article is about ● mention the error(s) ● describe what you expect from the editor You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention to an
article
regarding the people of South Hill and the related areas. basically, I was read the magazine yesterday and pinpointed some mistakes that need immediate correction and attention.
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, I would like to inform you about the Linking Words
article
and it was about Health and Saftey page number 8 the summary of that Use synonyms
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is about the population that prefers to eat Junk Food and eventually resulting in health issues owing to the unhygienic ingredients, Use synonyms
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the ratio of obesity directly liked with Quick Snack. Linking Words
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, it was overall a very informative magazine for folks to provide very crucial resources.
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, The most essential thing of that piece is the data, chart and graphs analysis used in order to provide maximum awareness Linking Words
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, the problem was mainly with the data about total population mentioned in the Linking Words
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was 54,500 for south hall area but it actual population is 64,500
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, the gender analysis is Linking Words
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not correct in line with the actual ground reality.
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Lastly
, I would like to request you to make certain corrections to the Linking Words
article
and republished it with accurate data on the number of people and gender how many females and males.
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Yours Faithfully,
Shaban RazaLinking Words
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.