Human activities is damaging the Earth or making it a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree?
The enormous innovations and discoveries played a vital role in the development of technology and human life on
earth
.People are having different opinions on whether Earth
is destroyed by human behaviour or man's development for getting worth-living destinations.I concur with the statement that the planet is influenced by disastrous effects caused by men's activities.
To embark with,humans are responsible for several environmental problems,foremost issue is such
as air,water and noise pollution.with the advancement of technology automobiles and industries are significantly increased consequently
resulted in inclined gas emission from factories,fumes exhaustion from vehicles that leads to global warming and devastating effect on Earth
.Moreover
,in many ,countries most of the acidic waste from industries is disposed of in oceans and rivers which causes adverse effects on marine life on this
planet.
In addition
to it.another catastrophic effect on the planet is deforestation.The population is soared exponentially,As a results logging of forests and reduction in natural resources has inclined to meet the demand for habitat and living.,Consequently
the count of trees is decreasing ,which in turn causes a change in climate and global warming,such
as greenhouse effects,acidic rains,drought and so on.
To conclude although
artificial intelligence has made life easier for mankind, industries and transportation have a deteriorating effect on Earth
and the atmosphere.which is not suitable at all for any kind of growth on earth
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite