You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Please accept my sincerest apologies for the loud music
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week. I had a birthday party and I was turning twenty years. We need to celebrate that day. I
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describe how sorry I am and how guilty I feel for the loud music. I swear that it
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happen again. To apologise
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you I will invite you tomorrow for a dinner to fix our feelings and
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hope you will come. I hope my
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happen again. I beg you to forgive me
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my mistake. I will be carried away by the celebration
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volume of the music went up. Yours faithfully,
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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