You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Please accept my sincerest apologies for the loud music
last
week. I had a birthday party and I was turning twenty years. We need to celebrate that day. I cant
describe how sorry I am and how guilty I feel for the loud music. I swear that it Correct your spelling
can't
wont
happen again. To apologise Add an apostrophe
won't
for
you I will invite you tomorrow for a dinner to fix our feelings and Change preposition
to
i
hope you will come. I hope my Change the capitalization
I
appologise
will be accepted Correct your spelling
apologies
apologise
it
Correct word choice
and it
wont
happen again.
I beg you to forgive me Add an apostrophe
won't
to
my mistake. I will be carried away by the celebration Change preposition
for
the
volume of the music went up.
Yours faithfully,Change preposition
as the
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.