Volunteering is one of the hot topics today. Is it a good idea to volunteer and why

Volunteering involves much work with people, cooking, building shelters, planting and improving personal qualities. Like every other
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has its pros and cons. I personally support volunteering because by doing
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you help others with what you can. Everyone has something or can do things that might change someone else's world.
To begin
with, volunteering can influence society.
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, after helping a lot of people change their perception of the world around them. They could better understand
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emotions and actions.
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, the affection
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your skills is tremendous. Volunteering helps
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skills like talking with others, working with different people, drawing, building or sewing.
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, volunteering can make everyone feels something.
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, after you see a family
that is
happily living in the house that you helped
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, you are glad for them. To sum up, volunteering can affect not only the life of the one who is in need
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but changes the one
that is
helping.
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