the use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The evolution of

technology

has been critically influenced positively and negatively the lives of human beings, more specifically the development of youngsters. In my opinion, I definitely believe that

technology

overall is dwindling the potential of children of being creative, especially if they are compared to

kids

in the past. I feel

this

way for two reasons that I would develop in the following paragraphs.

First

of all,

technology

is making the lives of

kids

too easy leading them to think less than toddlers in the past. Nowadays children have access to the internet which is wonderful but on the other ,hand they find all the information that they need with the simple fact of put a

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the computer, decreasing the chance of

kids

expand their imagination and

creativity

.

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soon

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is a compelling sample of

this

. He is

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seven years old and he usually

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to use my computer when he

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to draw pictures or do some assignation from

the

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school, and two weeks ago I

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forbidden

to him the use of the computer and I put pressure on him to elaborate a homework where the teacher was asking to make a big portrait using paints and

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, but he could not do it since he was used to

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ideas from

internet

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rather than thinking by himself and being creative.

This

is a good reason why I believe that

technology

is affecting the development of

creativity

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our

kids

.

Secondly

, the upcoming young society

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more time on social media, smartphones and computers which has been

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demonstrated

that decrease the potential of the

brain

of developing skills

such

as hand

writening

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writing

or painting, which is managed by a specific lobe of the

brain

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the imagination and

creativity

. To sum up,

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of the opinion that

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technology

is affecting the

brain

of our

kids

since when they are compared with the

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children

children's

childrens

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in the past, they were obligated to work using the unique tool

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available

"their mind"

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since they had

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not

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access to social media which decrease the

brain

development on specific areas that affect the

creativity

and

also

they

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obligated to

imaginate

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imagine

and use

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their

own hands in order to complete their assignations.