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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Due to successive waves of globalization and the massively booming advanced technology , it is rarely seen that the young generation spends their
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reading
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 or watching
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 on TV.
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 issue has sparked public attention from
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newspapers
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 and TV
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 , since the turn of the 21st Century , almost every
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 like to spend their precious
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wasting on social media
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 as Facebook , YouTube and Tik Tok .
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 , they become hectic by playing online games .
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 , either reading or watching
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 becomes a boring concern for them , and they do not want to put aside their
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 on that matter. Admittedly , there are many ways to solve those problems. And , teachers and parents play a crucial role in
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 of all , family members have the main responsibility to restrain
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children’s social media usage and should allow them within a
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 limit .
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 , as children totally appeal to the reward , parents can entice them to read
newspapers
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, teachers should give homework or assignments relating to the subject of the current affair or history so that youth have to search data from
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 or TV
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, inevitably. Having
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 of both causes and proposed solutions , there are likely to have some difficulties with
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 to mitigating social media usage in
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However
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 , it can be successfully achieved with the help of teachers and parents.
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