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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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People have different views as to whether various supermarkets are selling an imported
product
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 more and more in these decades
instead
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 of selling
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 that are produced in their own
country
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. In the following paragraphs, the reasons why
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 happens in the present day will be discussed in detail. While in my opinion, it brings several negatives development for
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 issue. In general, the reason for
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 issue is that some
country
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 is lacked special resources to provide for their citizen. By
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, It means that most of the
country
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 might explore the resources that they do not have in their
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,
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, in the US, they are always lacked herbs for cooking and producing some medicine, so they have to import these kinds of
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 from Asian
countries
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.
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, most of the imported
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 have high quality. As we have known, before distributing the
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 to other
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, those
products
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 have to pass the certificate in their
country
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 to guarantee the quality for ensuring the international customers.
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, I strongly believe that
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 action will bring some negative development. To be more precise, If supermarkets are imported more oversea
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, the population in that
country
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 might have less revenue. They could not find a good job and money to spend with their family. As we have known, imported
products
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 are very expensive.
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, people might purchase costly
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 that are not essential for their lifestyle.
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, most people in Asian
countries
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 prefer to purchase a cosmetic from the US market,
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 they can buy those
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 which are cheaper in their
country
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. In conclusion,
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the reasons why many supermarkets are imported goods from other
countries
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 as the lack of some unique
products
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 and high
products
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 quality.
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, My view is that it would bring negative development to
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 problem.
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