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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Other think that children's time is better spent more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is commonly believed that Physical
Education
such
 as sports or programmes related to physical improvement should be introduced to
children
 earlier
age
 school system is a must while some argue that young students should focus on only their academic studies. I firmly support the statement that
children
 who are younger
age
 should emphasise physical
education
 classes.
To begin
 with, most
people
 believe that sports or other physical related activities should be engaged to
children
 as early as possible. These activities may create
children
's talent and their ability for their future.
Moreover
, young
children
 can learn anything easier than older ones.
For instance
, in the UK, there are lots of football academies to produce young kids talented players.
Therefore
, the most appeared talented players are usually come out from youth football clubs.
On the other hand
, if
children
 spend too much time on their physical programmes, they will get poor results in their academic performance. Some may think that academic
education
 is the only way to succeed in our future journey because nowadays
people
 are more competitive. Having a degree and higher
education
 is essential in order to survive in the modern era. Without these,
people
 may not have well-paid jobs which will result in a poor situation. To conclude,
people
,
however
, think differently about
children
's
education
, as my point of view, it depends on the
children
's
age
. Younger
age
children
 should be introduced to physical
education
 and as teenage, the
education
 system should focus on their academic subjects.
In addition
, it is very important that engaging the
education
 system to learners is depending on the student's
age
.
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