In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV dramas?

Nowadays, in several
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the most popular in the entertenmenint world is gained by books and TV
series
that are based on crime and suspense. In
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essay, you shall find the reasons for the same and I would conclude by giving my opinion.
Firstly
; one of the biggest reasons why individuals are leaning
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criminal-minded web serials and books is to get thrilled by the adrenalin rush. People love to get high with
this
kind of kick they get. For ,example web
series
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gained the highest benchmark name and fame because it could create a higher level of thrilling experience for viewers by creating suspense and showing the way scandal was committed in order to win the throne.
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towards
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storybook
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and TV serials in order to gain more knowledge about things happening in their vicinity and can remain alert when similar kinds of fouls
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around them. In
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citizens can stay safe and remain alert. Some fictional and television plays are based on real line stories and some are completely false. One should have an interest in
this
section of entertainment as it becomes an important part of your life when it comes to safety. To exemplify one of the most popular daily
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in India is Crime petrol. Viewers from all most all age groups love to see it.
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, at times it has a
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detrimental
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impact on the psyche of some classes of people. At
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certain stories give rise to criminally minded
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. They learn tricks and hack ideas and try on someone.
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should be broadcasted with a certain disclaimer. To reiterate, several
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such
as crime story novels and online
series
is gaining popularity in order people get thrilling experience and more knowledge. In my
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such
things are helpful up to a certain limit and should be advised with certain checkpoints and disclaimers.
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  • phenomenon
  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
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