More and more people work at home and study at home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In the modern era technology is
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in the market for
facalities
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facilities
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life style
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. Many of person
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work
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at
home
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as well as
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by the computer on
mobile
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a mobile
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phone
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phones
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good sign for the upcoming generation, and
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will describe
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the positive
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acpect
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aspect
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for
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this
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statement. To
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begin
with,
internet
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the internet
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is
the
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a
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wonderful invention by
the
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apply
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science and technology. Nowadays many of
peole
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people
doing
work
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or study at
home
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,
that is
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the
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beneficial for the student as well as employment.
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, we know about, during covid-19, all countries are obey the rule of
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lock down
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, at that time
school
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schools
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and
college
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colleges
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were
also
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closed. So
that
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,
by
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with
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the help of
internet
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the internet
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study was continued. That was the best
roal
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role
for the internet and computer.
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,
this
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platform
also
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obey the rule of social
distanceing
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distancing
distance
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was carryon without any restrictions. That was
the
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a
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big positive sign
for
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of
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advantage
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the advantage
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of computer technology.
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, it is
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beneficial for the
employment
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employees
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who are working in MNC
company
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companies
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or private sectors.
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, many
of
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people go to
work
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away from living. If they will
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from
home
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, so they will save
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money
of
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transportation. Apart from
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, they
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spend more time
for
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his
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family and
work
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without any restrictions. So that
work
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from
home
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also
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the best option for better performance for the company and live
happy
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life. But
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,
few
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negative
side
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is
also
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in
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work
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working
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from
home
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. In variety, people who
work
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in
home
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insted
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instead
of company, they have not proper communication skill with
customer
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a customer
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or other employees. To conclude,
positive
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the positive
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aspect is more than
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the negative
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aspect, so
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work
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working
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from
home
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is the best way
for
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to
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live happiness and
achivment
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achievement
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