Education
is vital
for better and
secureChange the verb form
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our life.In the present day many
of Change preposition
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younger
people
goingWrong verb form
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to foreign for higher
education
by
hisCorrect pronoun usage
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parents.I will discuss the
and
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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in
upcomingCorrect article usage
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paragraphs with my opinion.
On one hand ,
abroadCorrect article usage
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education
system is totally different from our country.
EducationAdd an article
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system is important for
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life.
For
many
of Change preposition
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countries are believe in
knowledge so
people
must learn about
base knowledge.
Therefore
they can easily get a job in
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desireWrong verb form
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field.
they can balance their life by themselves an account of , the person who
liveChange the verb form
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in Change preposition
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abroad they live alone so they have to manage all
worksFix the agreement mistake
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like study, job as well as chores of home, so they
are increaseChange the verb form
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hisCorrect pronoun usage
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strength in
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area without any support.
On the other hand
, we know who
people
are migrateChange the verb form
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in abroad they leave
hisCorrect pronoun usage
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friends and family members so at that time they feel alone.
Moreover
sometimeReplace the word
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young
people
goingWrong verb form
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inChange preposition
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depression or stress so
inChange the preposition
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that moment
can help
himCorrect pronoun usage
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.
In addition
,
mainChange the article
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drawback is inflation.We know about foreign countries like London, Dubail is
mostCorrect article usage
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expensive countries.
Therefore
people
who live in that country
they Correct pronoun usage
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have
toCorrect your spelling
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moreAdd a missing verb
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costly to enjoy that kind of culture and festival.
According to my opinion, young
people
must go in abroad for
betterCorrect article usage
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and secure future due to there
areChange the verb form
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numberChange the article
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of resources for
our growth.
To conclude, foreign culture and
education
isChange the verb form
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beneficial for young
.