Some people believe, limiting the speed is the best way for the road safety, while other believe there are other ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I am glad to receive your letter and all the
more happy
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to know your plan to go for summer camp to mount
Butu
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But
. I am writing
this
letter to provide you
some
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tips from my past experience. I am very sure
this
trip will bring you a great
bundel
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bundle
of joy. You have always
being
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wanting to come along with me while I go outdoor; but, your work commitment never allowed you to do so.
This
holiday will bring you immense pleasure to be in nature and treat you by
rejuvinating
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rejuvenating
. It shall be refreshing from
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monotonous
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routine and take you close to mother nature.
Only
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thing I am worried
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the hot summer season
that
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could be a disadvantage
to
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you. As it is
volcano
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mountain, it has more
for
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rocky trails and it may
dehydtare
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dehydrate
you while hiking.
Heat stroke
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can put you down,
however
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you can surely beat the heat by
hrdrating
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hydrating
yourself well with plenty of water and pumping electrolytes. Do
cary
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carry
a comfortable pair of hiking
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as
beginers
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beginners
usually make mistake by picking up
wrong
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one. Thank you for asking me to join you for
this
camping
;
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but
unfortunately
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I would not be able to come along. I have already
being
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to
this
location twice before. If it would have been some other location I would have given
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thought. Me and my other friends we are hunting for
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location for
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nature trail. Do let me know if you need any
further
help or suggestion and I am waiting to know your experience from your travel. Regards, Neha Shah
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