You are going for a one week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter you should: thank him/her and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do

Dear Smitha, I am writing

this

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letter to say thank you for going to stay at my home.

Firstly

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, I want to tell you my vacation dates that am going to stay away from my

house

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. I am going to start here from 8th April and most probably I will be returned back on 15th April. In the meanwhile, I will prepare some sort of preservative foods for you. I believe it will be more helpful for you in a hectic schedule. Since there are so many people at the

entrance

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gate it will be more difficult to park your car. So I would like to tell you the comfortable

entrance

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to enter into the

house

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. From the main

entrance

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take left and there will be a small shop, behind that small way will be there. That way is the backside

entrance

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of the

house

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. It will be more comfortable for you to enter.

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, I request you to pour the water for my plants on daily basis. Not only pour the water into plants but

also

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do feed my little birds in my

house

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. I would be more thankful if you do

this

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for me. Thank you for considering me. Yours sincerely, Tejaswi.

tejaswi.chinthapalli

Apr 5, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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