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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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It is argued that
workers
 are often inactive, both during the workday and in their free
time
, and
this
 will impact these people's
health
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the reasons why so many working people do not
exercise
 enough and how to solve
this
 problem. On the one hand, there are several reasons why
workers
 do not get enough
exercise
.
Firstly
, the working people must work really hard, and so they do have not enough leisure
time
. As they have no
time
 to rest, they will not have enough
time
 to do
exercise
.
Secondly
, some
workers
 tend to put in extra hours to meet up with targets and achieve goals.
Therefore
, they will ignore the importance of doing exercises, and
this
 will affect their
health
.
For example
, my uncle is a worker, he only focuses on his work and refuses to
exercise
 and
this
 will influent his
health
such
 as obesity and blood pressure.
On the other hand
, there are some ways to solve
this
 problem.
To begin
 with,
workers
 should establish a schedule in order to have more free
time
 during the week.
this
 will make their
health
 become better and better.
For instance
, my father often establishes his schedule that has more free
time
, so he will have
time
 to do
exercise
 and
this
 makes his
health
 improve. In conclusion,
workers
 tend to not
exercise
 because of their hard work, it seems to me that they should take breaks while working in order to help them improve their
health
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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