Topic: some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that
students
in different levels of
education
are forced to devote much time and energy to learning theoretical lessons which are not basically useful after graduation
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I
am fully agree
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with
this
notion. In my view, each subject like science, chemistry and so on comprises practical and learning facts sections and both of them are interrelated and interdependent. Due to the fact that practical skills are on the basis of theoretical parts,
thus
students
need to acquire somewhat
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knowledge but it seems that
conventional
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education
system is being run in our schools and universities
do
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not consider equal consistency between both
of
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them. Unfortunately,
current
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system is designed to focus simply on reading and memorizing useless information. Undoubtedly, when graduated
students
are ready to enter
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the labor
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labor
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market and apply for
a
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occupation relevant to their fields, they are unemployable and have no desirable
qualification
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,
consequently
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they are led to do grunt work and even if someone succeeds to find a good job the sooner the later he will lose it due to lack of adequate practical experience.
In addition
, a vivid example of
this
issue is that I remember that during
the
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high school my teachers always pressurized
students
to memorize numerous formulas and statistics in order to pass our exams.
Although
I learned them, none of them
have
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never
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been used and I can’t remember even
few
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of them .in my perspective, it was
utter
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waste of time and
apparently
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the method are still being followed. In conclusion, the importance of
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hands- on
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experience should be noticed as the top priority for all
education
systems because it
enhance
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the chance of getting
a fulfilling jobs
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a fulfilling job
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.
Furthermore
, holding workshops
in
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all levels is one of the perfect and ideal
solution
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for upgrading
education
.
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