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Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The essence of marriage is to produce children to make a family that couples are dreaming of.
However
, motherhood is one of the major crucial roles inside the household when it comes to decision making either to have babies or not and I immensely agree that
mother
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 is
also
 entirely responsible for bringing the children up. On the
first
 hand, women are solely obliged for bearing the child
on
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in
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her
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their
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 tummy for 9 months; all sacrifices that she faces is one of the onerous tasks to do,
likewise
 with regard to delivery of the
baby
 they tend to panic because of the peculiarity body changes and severe pain. Aside from that, some
mother
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mothers
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 suffered from death due to delivery complications especially if related to
cesarian
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the cesarian
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 section where the expected
mother
 will be operated
to
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on to
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 evacuate the
baby
 from her uterus.
Thus
,
the
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pregnant women will always be
on
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between life and death.
This
 is the number one reason why females think a million times prior
conceiving
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to conceiving
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 the
baby
. On the
second
 hand, after
delivery
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the delivery
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 of
baby
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the baby
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; the
mother
 will take care of the infant until early
adolescent
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,
nevertheless
, they ended up
to shoulder
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shouldering
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 the total upbringing of the child.
For instance
, at night she will stay wide awake to feed the infant,
to
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clean and attend
the
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 defecation and urination of
child
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the child
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. Those long hour nights without sleep
is
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are
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 torturing
to
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the side of the women. As well as from the
first
 walk of the
baby
 until they run; from the
first
 day of school until
univeristy
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university
 graduation. The father might be helpful
on
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in
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otherways
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other ways
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like
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by
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 giving financial and emotional support system.
Hence
,
mother
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the mother
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 will be the appointed person to carry all the loads of responsibilities with regard to the babies. In summary,
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the mother
a mother
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mother
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mothers
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 will be given more emphasis
when
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on when
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 and whether to conceive babies or not. Aside from all factors that pregnancy will bring to the females, they are
also
 entitled
for
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to
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molding
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moulding
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 their children from infancy until
adulhood
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adulthood
.
This
 is the essence of motherhood and
mother
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the mother
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 knows best all the time.
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