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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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As per the distinct mindset of different people, society has been
devided
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divided
 into two groups.
Therefore
,
this
 has become a
debateable
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debatable
 issue, whether, young ones should initiate their
education
curiculum
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curriculum
 as
easry
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easy
early
 as possible in their life or
to
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begin after
couple
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 of years.
This
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both
the
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viewpoints
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view points
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viewpoints
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 and shall conclude
my
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 opinion towards the end. To commence with the
first
 notion, there are
myrid
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myriad
 things to be shared in the favour of early
education
.
Firstly
, nowadays, parents
desires
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 to put their little ones at preschool as they can get
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 exposure. As a consequence, it helps children to develop social and communication skills.
Secondly
, there is a belief,
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 little buds are exposed to
educative
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an educative
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 class, they
excell
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excel
 in their future.
Aditionally
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Additionally
, nowadays, many families have both working
parent
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parents
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. In order to
babysitiing
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babysitting
, guardians
prefers
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 to start formal
education
 as soon as possible.
As a result
to
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 all of the above reasons, progeny learn to develop life skills
more
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faster and are found to be better independent.
On the other hand
, there are individuals who think, their lads should start to attain schooling after
achiveing
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achieving
 certain age. They believe, their
offspirngs
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offsprings
offspring
 have
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 brain and should not be
preasurised
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pressurised
pressurized
 at
early
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 age.
Additionally
,
this
 shall burden little
ones
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 whit loads of knowledge during their delicate period of playful, and fun activities.
However
, they agree primary schooling is necessary but can be eventually
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persued
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 during the growing period of their life. To conclude, I agree with the former idea of
education
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 children at
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beginning
begening
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the begening
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 of their age as in
this
competative
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competitive
 world it has become immensely significant that a child should
excell
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excel
in formal
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education
 and is key to have
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successful
succesfull
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a succesfull
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 future.
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