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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
Some
people
 argue that these days modern
people
 have too many
choices
. In my opinion, I partially agree with
this
 statement, because the
number
 of
choices
are
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 increasing dramatically in some areas, and these changes discourage
people
 to decide properly,
although
 job markets are more improved than
the
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 past. Admittedly,
people
 can get a better occupation from a huge amount of them, as modern
people
 can work anytime anywhere due to the various workstyle and
advancement
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 of the internet.
For instance
, if a person wants to start a side business at night, he can find a better job from web services,
although
 previous companies often forbid side businesses.
Nevertheless
, the
first
 reason why I believe that
people
 have too many
choices
 is that college students might choose a study course from numerous subjects. The more technology is advancing, the more new type of subjects are increasing in modern society. Apparently, the increasing
number
 of education passes is better for students, but they cannot assess the value of each course, and decide properly what subjects they should take.
In addition
, the
number
 of items is rising radically compared to the past. Before
advent
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 of online commerce,
people
 went shopping
by
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 their
foots
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, but modern
people
 are able to buy anything on the internet without a limitation of inventory.
As a result
,
this
 change raises the
number
 of buying
decision
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decisions
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,
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 and makes
people
 difficult to purchase the best one from numerous items. In conclusion, modern
people
 have too many
choices
.
People
 cannot decide better one from a huge amount of
choice
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, especially in education and shopping, while
people
 can find a better
job
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jobs
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 due to modernization.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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