Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV has bad influences, so this kind of infornation should be restricted on the media. To what extend do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words
The
media
is the place to transmit information
that needs to be noticed in a day to the people
, one of the most noticed news is articles with information
about criminals
. There are some people
who believe that the detailed depiction of crime information
and images in newspapers and TV will cause bad
influence and that these forms of communication should be limited. But in my Correct article usage
a bad
view
I disagree with that opinion and Add a comma
,view
this
essay will give arguments to prove my point.
To begin
with, when a broadcaster publishes an article related to criminals
, people
will panic and it will be worse when they do not know the image of that criminal. Fears arise when residents
know they are living with offenders but do not know exactly who they are and that directly affects the morale of the people
living near the crime scene. People
's work performance can be affected by mental
decline. Add an article
the mental
Therefore
the media
should describe the criminals
in detail to avoid residents
' fear of causing undue psychological influence.
Besides
, if the newspapers only report the cases but they don't tell people
about the culprit, it will cause riots targeting innocent people
. The actions
of the perpetrator
can lead to hatred of the people
, but the residents
are not able to know the image of the perpetrator
, which will make them suspicious of each other and lead to fights. For example
, a murder case is published in the media
, the perpetrator
's actions
make people
hate him, but they do not know his exact information
. That makes them suspicious of people
whose actions
they consider to be unusual and then
they want to arrest people
they think are criminals
to
the police station, it would be potentially more dangerous if the Change preposition
at
people
directly beat the person.
In short, the media
should give important information
about the perpetrator
to avoid fear
of Add an article
the fear
residents
. Besides
, in my opinion, broadcasters may not post too detailed information
about the perpetrator
's criminal actions
to avoid bad influence.Submitted by doibichhoa on
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