You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

#language #first #friend #suggestions

Dear Loganathan, Hope you and your family all are well. I’m happy to convey that as you advised during the

last

visit, decided to join the spoken English course. Whenever you come here you always suggested learning an additional

language

especially English. As you said earlier, English is a worldwide

language

and if we learn

then

we can get more opportunities. I’m really thinking of it and

finally

decided to learn. I know very well when you see

this

letter you feel very excited. I need your support and suggestions to learn quickly. You are well educated and you already had experience in learning

this

language

. You

also

have practical exposure to using

this

language

. I’m eagerly waiting to see you soon. I have an idea to come to my uncle's home which is nearby your office. If you are free,

then

we can meet and spend some time together. Hope to see you soon Your friend Karthi

Submitted by karthikbala85 on Wed Apr 06 2022

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1Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

158 words

9.00

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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