You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Loganathan, Hope you and your family all are well. I’m happy to convey that as you advised during the

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visit, decided to join the spoken English course. Whenever you come here you always suggested learning an additional

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especially English. As you said earlier, English is a worldwide

language

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and if we learn

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we can get more opportunities. I’m really thinking of it and

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decided to learn. I know very well when you see

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letter you feel very excited. I need your support and suggestions to learn quickly. You are well educated and you already had experience in learning

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language

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. You

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have practical exposure to using

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language

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. I’m eagerly waiting to see you soon. I have an idea to come to my uncle's home which is nearby your office. If you are free,

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we can meet and spend some time together. Hope to see you soon Your friend Karthi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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