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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced.

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Garbage, which is increasing rapidly, is the most threatening issue the world faces today. In recent times,
people
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 generating too much waste.There are several reasons for
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 a situation and
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 a few visible influences too. Both aspects are explained ensuing the paragraph.
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 with, discussing the reason, the most common one is ,the amount of a waster we produce has increased.The other cause is something breaks we throw it away and buy a new one by
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, I mean that amount of household waste is increasing in a present time .
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 ,products are not made to
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.Some advertisers are attracted
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 to buy new fashion products. So
people
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 have most interested to buy a new and fashionable product. On the one hand, the mentioned causes have some impacts too. The foremost effect is seen on the environment.
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 can increase the recycling of garbage they must be reduced trash and using the recycling process we can manufacture new products.
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,
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 encourages
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 to minimise the use of plastic bags and they can aware
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 to help with webinars and social events. For ,example Times of India reported that 40 per cent of
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 use paper bags because the Indian
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 banned the use of plastic bags.
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, to conclude the topic, it can be
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 commented that the amount of a waster we produce has increased and has bad effects.so, the
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 should adopt a recycling process to decline garbage.
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