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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Despite the availability of a great deal of
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translation
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 software, foreign
language
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 learning is still necessary. I completely agree with
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 statement because
people
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 tend not to interact with each other
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 when using a
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 tool.
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, they can have higher chances to succeed in life if they speak another
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.
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 software discourages
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 interaction.
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, if a tourist asks a local for directions by using a
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 tool, the local would probably say nothing more than the directions since most
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 do not like communicating with a machine.
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, tourists who are able to speak the local
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 show that they respect and love the local culture. Locals in turn would extend their hospitality, asking about where they are from or even showing them around.
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, speaking a
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language
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 increases a person’s chances of success in life. The Internet has made the world unbounded.
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 allows a person to easily make their voices heard by
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 in another country as long as they share a common
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. Take
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 the famous Norwegian YouTuber Nora Alex. His Channel wouldn’t have reached more than one million subscribers if he weren’t able to speak English well and just used
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 software to add English captions to his videos. In conclusion, even though there are many
translation
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 tools available, learning another
language
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 is still necessary. For one thing, these tools tend to put
people
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 off
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 interaction, and for another those who speak a
second
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language
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 can gain the advantage of reaching more
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 and
thus
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 raise the odds of success in life.
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