Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give opinion

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of their own country.It is considered that in museums every country should put

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economic

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cultural country,it has various languages,

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religious

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things in their museums

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that foreigners will

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to India to gain more

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information

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France

has a very famous painting of

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to watch it.

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nations

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economy.

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and history but they cannot afford it,regarding their own land's

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gallery

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museum has

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their people to

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various

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traditions.

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