Governments should spend money on railways than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
in the running days, some people believe that government should invest more in railway sections as compared to roads. I myself disagree with
this
point of view, I believe railways are better than roads among transportation systems all over the world.
on the one hand, the improvement of railways has had substantial importance in the transportation systems, especially when it comes to the conservation of the environment. because there are no cars to emit harmful fumes. moreover
, it is not only affordable but also
plays an important role in making life easier for people who have no spare time to be stuck in heavy traffic. take japan as the most patently obvious example, the fastest and most budget-friendly railway in the world was located in this
country with the proud.
on the other hand
, one negative justification often given for road is that amount of toxic gasses nearby the crowded roads are far more than in other places. therefore
, the number of individual who gets infected with respiratory
illness have had a soaring trend in the world and, governments have responsibility for managing the crisis. Add an article
the respiratory
moreover
, if do not be aware of the danger of gasses chiefly on the health of humans and animals, the consequences will be far-reaching in the near future.
to conclude, humans can play a vital role in protecting the environment with the best choices which include fewer budgets required for transportation so as to relocate to somewhere else and, the minimum time needed in this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite