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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It always starts with the perception of
community
, as every human being has their own way of thinking when it comes to giving back to
the
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society. In the
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essay we will briefly discuss
about
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both
of
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the opinions and in the
,
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end I will
also
 give my point of view. As mentioned in the topic, some people think that their job is done when they pay
taxes
 as for them it is the maximum they can do for society. If they know their money is used in a better way and for the improvement of
community
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,
nation
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 are getting equal or even more benefits from paying the
taxes
then
 it is okay to think that paying tax is enough. for example, European countries charge 40-50% of the
taxes
 but in ,return they get free education for their kids, free health services and other benefits. the other perspective is that paying
taxes
 is not enough as
nation
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have
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 more responsibility towards the
community
, well
this
also
ondepend
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depend
on depend
 where you are living, If you are coming from underdeveloped countries where paying tax is not enough, Because of the unstable government laws and policies, even after paying ,
taxes
 there is no improvement. In these countries paying
taxes
 is not enough as the majority of the people are living under the poverty line,
therefore
,
therefore
 the rich people of the
community
 can help them as a member of
association
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.
hence
, we can say that paying
taxes
 is not a big enough contribution especially when you are living in an undeveloped country. It is highly important that apart from paying
taxes
, one should
also
 be responsible
for
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 the public for the betterment of their population, by contributing in different ways
such
 as: doing some charity work, participating in programs for good cause, keeping their neighbourhood clean, helping others in need. In my opinion, I would always agree with the fact that only paying
taxes
 is not enough and we as a part of
community
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the community
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 have more responsibilities than paying
taxes
 only.
such
 as following the government rules and regulations, taking care of the
enviroment
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environment
,
promoting
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 eco-friendly activities,
this
 is something we cannot serve only by paying
taxes
. In conclusion, I would say that in some
region
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 it is okay if
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the family
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family
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families
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 are only paying
taxes
 because their government is efficient enough to manage tax money effectively whereas one should
also
 be responsible even after paying
taxes
 to serve their company better.
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