Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

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letter to let you know the shopping facilities and issues are being faced by the individuals.

Firstly

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, I live in the Begumpet

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where a wide range of products will be available for shopping. Mainly women related

shops

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are more in

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area

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This

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area

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is famous for bangle

shops

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.Not only the bangle

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but

also

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garment

shops

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are

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famous in

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particular

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. I usually like the bangle

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area

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Although

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this

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area

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is famous for its shopping still there is lack of facilities. There is no parking space available for the two-wheelers who came for shopping.

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, the roadway is

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not in good condition even for a walk. Since there is no parking availability the customers for the shopping

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became less. I would like to suggest to you that if the road becomes wider there will be some free space for walking as well as parking

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. So that all individuals can shop comfortably and park their vehicles easily. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully, Tejaswi.

Submitted by tejaswi.chinthapalli on Wed Apr 06 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

You and your friend have both been accepted to a study abroad programme in Paris France

To achieve personal happiness, the relationships we have with other people (friends, colleagues, family) are more essential than every other thing. Issues like wealth and occupations take the second place. Write to support this claim

Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The popularity of online education has grown significantly in recent years. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Most schools give their students grades based on their performance. Why do so many schools utilise this method of student evaluation? In what ways does this affect students?