Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Bobby, How are you, I am glad to hear that you decided to
license
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next
month,
that is
absolutely
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great idea for driving by yourself. To get your own driving
license
means you no need to wait for
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or other public transit.
Moreover
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you could use that
license
as identification proof anywhere. I would love to recommend the A1 driving school which is located in Surrey central station .there are immense of
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around
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Surrey station but A1
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because 2 weeks before my one of the get
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and
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from there so definitely I have faith
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his words. They have
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professional instructors for training . I suggest
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with yourself
first
and more hours to practice there.
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you have
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learn
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with
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traffic rules and regulations. It might be possible you would not
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on
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attempt but don't be sad ,you can take
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again and definitely get your
license
. All the best
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Poorma
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Poor
Poorman
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Driving licence
  • Public transportation
  • Independence
  • Daily commutes
  • Emergency transportation
  • Self-reliance
  • Structured learning environment
  • Professional driving instructors
  • Advanced driving techniques
  • Safety awareness
  • Flexible timings
  • Weather conditions
  • Basic vehicle maintenance
  • Traffic signs
  • Theory test material
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