The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two charts compare how the latest information is broadcasted in two countries, Australia and Canada.

Overall

, both countries have similar patterns but with slight differences in how the

news

is transmitted. In general, Canadians access

the

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information mainly through television accounting for 40%.

By contrast

, Australians prefer to surf the Internet as a principal way to get the

news

, with more than half of the proportion, at 52%. One significant difference is represented by data related to print copies, where it was 14% and half of

this

value in Australia. Another considerable difference is noticed in getting the

news

on the radio: in fact, 7% of the Canadian inhabitants prefer to

listen

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radio, compared to the Australian population with a value of only 2%. Only a mere percentage of people did not specify the source of

news

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. In conclusion, it can be observed that going online and watching television are the most preferred ways of accessing the

news

compared to other systems of transmission.

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5 paragraphs

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Clear and correct grammar

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