news editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. what factors do you think influence their decision? Do we used to bed news ? would it be better if more good news was reported ?

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that we see or hear
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TV or
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edited by
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editors
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many reasons. In my opinion,
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effectiveness and profitability are more prominent. It is
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view that there are several factors
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have a significant effect on selecting a TV programme and a papers' subject. One of the most important
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is the widespread influence of media on thoughts.
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impact is positive and
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is vice versa.
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editors have a strong connection with politicians in order to yield their policy goals or they cooperate with some companies for refusing to publish bad facts about them. I
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believe that
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the number of negative
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increasing in the world
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, these
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newscasts
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have an adverse effect on community mental health and not only do people used to them
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they are more likely to feel depressed.
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current time, humans always spend most of their time
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reading and watching announcements
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negative facts are often presented in
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part of television programmes or
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page of papers because it
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more audiences but I think if
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news
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reported good events more, it would boost social happiness.
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, publishments with regard to
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issue should present more
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subjects. In conclusion, media editors can make a vital decision about what facts should be released or not?
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from my perspective, we should be aware of
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and bad
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on our
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