Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

#council #sports #leisure #centre #money #friends #community #effects #people

Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to share my opinion about your early decision to close of fitness

centre

which is located in heart of the town

centre

Firstly

, I am an active member of your

centre

and I and my close friends have been sporting since 2015 for at least 8 years. because

this

place is a good place to have more fun and

also

spend our leisure time.

moreover

due to their low fee which is very suitable for students usually we are at their restaurant.

Secondly

, nowadays due to changes in our lifestyle and all the people do not have enough exercise developing sports and sports central could provide better conditions for healthcare .

thirdly

, because our region has cold weather we need indoor space for sport. So if you do not find a good place to replace of current fitness

centre

All people are deprived of having a stadium in winter I am forwarding to get the answer from you. I wish you would review your decision. Yours faithfully,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

174 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
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