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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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Sharing
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 with or without charge is now controversial.Some
people
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 claim that valuable
information
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such
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 as scientific research,
business
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 and the academic world should be shared freely because of its benefits to the individual and society, but in my ,oipne some vital importance shouldn't be shared without a fee.The below essay will elucidate both views.
To begin
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 with,
people
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 support the sharing of science,
business
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 and academic-related
information
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 because of some reasons.
Firstly
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, for individuals, free access to
this
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information
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 will facilitate their work and study.
For instance
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,If a top entrepreneur shares the experience of setting up and running a
business
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 effectively, many others can learn from it and start their own
business
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 the right way.
Secondly
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, society has a knowledgeable experience workforce,since the knowledge is exchanged and
people
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 can access the notions that are worth sharing.
However
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, I agree with the view that access to some crucial and valuable
information
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 should be charged.The initial reason is that some pieces of
information
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 are priceless because they have been discovered after endless efforts and hard work of a person or even a team.Charging a fee not only show their contribution but
also
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 enhance the responsibility of users.
For example
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, many companies have created graphical content for subjects like physics,
this
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 requires a lot of effort from the team, and it will be unfair if
this
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 work is shared freely.
In addition
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 to
this
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, some
information
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 is too important to be widely spread. To conclude,
although
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 some
people
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 are in favour of sharing academic knowledge freely, strongly believe that some
information
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 should not be shared because of its importance and value.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • innovation
  • collective knowledge
  • security risk
  • proprietary information
  • competitive advantage
  • democratization
  • sensitive technology
  • ethical guidelines
  • nondisclosure agreements
  • peer-review processes
  • validated
  • open access
  • regulated access
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