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what are te dos and don'ts of living with a roommate?

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Living with another person in
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 room and sharing belongings with them can be so challenging, It’s better to set some rules early on to avoid future disagreements and conflicts. DOS 1)You must respect each other’s privacy ,
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 and
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 cross the line. Everyone needs to have their personal space so It won’t cause flights between roommates ,
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 in dormitories people must study so It’s important not to intrude
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 other’s privacy. 2) Share responsibilities: make sure to divide chores between yourselves equally
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 decide who is taking out trash or vacuuming each week. 3)one of the most important
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 is
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 yourself
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 and put up with each other during difficulties
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You
 should try to understand each other and go over things together. DON’TS 1)
Don’t
 borrow or take your
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 stuff before asking. 2) If one of you
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 a late night
Don’t
 wake anyone up and stay quiet. 3)
Don’t
 play loud music or have friends over If your roommate isn’t comfortable with it. 4)
Don’t
 be messy and clean up after yourself. You can’t just expect your roommate to clean your mess. These are some etiquettes that you need to stick to
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If you want to have
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 experience with your roommates.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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