Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you dsicovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: Where and when you lost your bag What your bag looks like What its contents were

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Dear Sir, I am drafting

this

letter to draw your attention to my lost baggage , which I forgot at the airport a few days ago. I travelled from London to Vancouver on 6th April 2022 i.e.

last

Wednesday. Today, I unpacked my luggage and tried to reach out for my laptop but I did not find my laptop and other personal items which I packed in my handbag. I leave my handbag for the security check , as it was rush hour I forgot to collect my briefcase from the security check post. My handbag has a camouflage cover , and it has a dial lock. My backpack contains my hp laptop , a couple of pairs of clothes, and $500 in cash. As I am a student, it is important to me to have those items in my possession because I have all the assignments saved and need to submit them in a week . Could I request to take it urgently and proceed

further

? Please let me know if you need any other information. Thank you for your support.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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The Closing

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People who were born in rural areas often move to big cities when they become adult. What are the reason for this? it ia a positive or negative trend?