You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

Hey bob, How are you? It has been a month
to
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see you . I hope you and your family are maintaining your health. Well, nowadays I am learning
french
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language
from Alliance Francaise which is located
besides
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esso
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gas station on 23rd and 50st Avenue. As you know
that
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,
that is
not
my
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primary
language
I want to ask you
some
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for some
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recommandations
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recommendations
and techniques to learn, comprehend and practice in my routine
language
.
Additionally
, it will help me to get my PR(permanent residency) approved quickly as the french
language
will boost enough CRS(
canadian
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ranking
sysytem
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system
) score. I approached you
becauce
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because
you are
inherent
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francophonic
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individual, above all you are my best friend. Actually, I am planning to visit you and see you
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this
Monday after my classes in
evening
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approx
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at approx
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7:00 p.m. It's been a long time
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see you as well so
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we will go for a good dinner, and we will discuss
about
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french
language
. Can you tell me your
conviniency
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convenience
so that if needed, we can
preponed
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or postponed the gathering? Please let me know as you can. Take care. yours lovingly, Deep
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