You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend.In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

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Hey bob, How are you? It has been a month

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since to

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see you . I hope you and your family are maintaining your health. Well, nowadays I am learning

french

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the french

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language

from Alliance Francaise which is located

besides

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beside

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esso

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Esso

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gas station on 23rd and 50st Avenue. As you know

that

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apply

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that is

not

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the

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primary

language

I want to ask you

some

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for some

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recommandations

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recommendations

and techniques to learn, comprehend and practice in my routine

language

Additionally

, it will help me to get my PR(permanent residency) approved quickly as the french

language

will boost enough CRS(

canadian

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Canadian

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ranking

sysytem

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system

) score. I approached you

becauce

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because

you are

inherent

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an inherent

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francophonic

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Francophonic

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individual, above all you are my best friend. Actually, I am planning to visit you and see you

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this

Monday after my classes in

evening

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the evening

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approx

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at approx

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7:00 p.m. It's been a long time

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since to

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see you as well so

that

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apply

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we will go for a good dinner, and we will discuss

about

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french

language

. Can you tell me your

conviniency

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convenience

so that if needed, we can

preponed

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prepone

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or postponed the gathering? Please let me know as you can. Take care. yours lovingly, Deep

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

189 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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