Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
In the contemporary era, there are numerous networking statement and the following paragraphs will
sites
through with
Correct your spelling
which
people
can connect with their family and friends such
as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter; however
, many masses opine that the demerits of these types of social networking sites
have outweighed the merits as these websites are dangerous for personas well as a society. I completely agree withCorrect determiner usage
this
be discussed
my news Wrong verb form
discuss
along with
supporting examples. To begin
with
nowadays, Criminal activities are Increasing day by day and one of the main causes behind Add a comma
with,
this
is social media
networking sites
. In simple words, people
usually share their personal information on these websites including their biodata, personal photos, locations and many more things. The offenders take the
advantage of these things and commit crimes Correct article usage
apply
such
as kidnapping robbery and even murders
. Fix the agreement mistake
murder
for example
, according to
a survey by WHO in 2018, almost 60 per cent of crimes occurred because of networking sites
. Hence
, these sites
have had a serious dangerous effect on a person's life. Moving further
, these sites
have had a negative impact on society as well. People
are now addicted to using excessive social media
sites
and they do not give importance to their career, family or even their personal health. Besides
this
, people
compare their life
with actresses and actresses Fix the agreement mistake
lives
and
which causes depression, jealousy, stress and frustration.Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
, nowadays Students do not give emphasis on their studies as a result
they are unable to achieve their desired scores studies. For instance
,in a survey conducted by Times Now in 2021, 10th students who use frequently use social media
sites
, have failed in all subjects. This
is very dangerous for society because new generations go in the wrong direction they continuously adopt bad habits through social networking sites
. In conclusion, using social media
sites
is becoming a trend and people
feel incomplete without using them. Although
these sites
have some positive points, negative points are more as it
Correct pronoun usage
they
causes
to increase in criminal activities and new generations are more addicted to them rather than their studies.Correct subject-verb agreement
cause
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion