The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourage people from doing activitis which usually involve very little risk To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Radio, TV and the Internet have to reduce the bad
information
they tell people
because they could make them disappointed to do normal activities.
In general, most news
which is heard in hole-world
contains important happened that people
want to know. While,
desiring to know new data cause media make attempt to publish sometimes masked Remove the comma
apply
information
. However
, this
information
will able to affect on crowd's life but they should reckon because if they concealed data from society, freedom might be impacted. So, news
should be available to every person in the world
, ,,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
they have bad effects. Add a comma
,however
In addition
, a great deal of importance is news
can prepare pupils for bad situations. For example
, when two or more governments had conflicts in an area of the world
, people
could follow the news
to find the best way to save themselves.
On the other hand
, the presence to had news
could be disappointed and make a man unhappy. In fact, following news
may cause people
will not able to make decisions. For instance
, terrible information
about real estate can cause a man will not to purchase a suitable house. Besides
, people
should find the best way to use information
. However
, most of us are used to hearing news
without any reactions unless they are attractive to us. But doing so is numerously becoming increase over 20 years and it would be perilous in future.
In conclusion, it seems in the future world
if we want it or not, people
hear a considerable amount of bad news
. whereas we are obligate
to find a good way to use them. Because the Replace the word
obliged
world
with free information
is far better than a world
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