You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Mr or Madam, I am writing
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letter to share my idea about the new decision
of building
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to build
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a modern shopping
center
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centre
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near Andarzgoo
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street
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Street
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next to Gheytarieh
park
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Park
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. I heard
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shopping has at least
seven-floor whit
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seven floors with
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a lot of stores
as well as
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a big food court. I think
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is a good idea because in
this
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state there is not any contemporary
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also
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apply
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equipped shopping centre but I am concerned
how
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about how
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do
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they provide enough parking for
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shopping centre
due to
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heavy
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the heavy
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traffic
in
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on
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this
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street
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, building a new complex shopping might create more traffic in
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area
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,
this
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street
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and nearby
street
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do not have enough capacity for a large number of cars.
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, I am eagerly waiting
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for
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you to give me some information about your plan
also
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I want to know how you can provide enough space for parking without any disturbance to current inhabitants. Yours faithfully, Salehi
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the greeting and closing are appropriate and formal in a letter to the council.
task achievement
The main points are covered, but there is room for improvement in providing a complete and detailed response to the task prompt.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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