You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it
Dear Mr or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to share my idea about the new decision of building
a modern shopping Change preposition
to build
center
near Andarzgoo Change the spelling
centre
street
next to Gheytarieh Capitalize word
Street
park
.
I heard Capitalize word
Park
this
shopping has at least seven-floor whit
a lot of stores Correct your spelling
seven floors with
as well as
a big food court. I think this
is a good idea because in this
state there is not any contemporary also
equipped shopping centre but I am concerned Rephrase
apply
how
Change preposition
about how
do
they provide enough parking for Unnecessary verb
apply
this
shopping centre due to
heavy
traffic Correct article usage
the heavy
in
Change preposition
on
this
street
, building a new complex shopping might create more traffic in this
area in addition
, this
street
and nearby street
do not have enough capacity for a large number of cars.
Finally
, I am eagerly waiting that
you to give me some information about your plan Correct word choice
for
also
I want to know how you can provide enough space for parking without any disturbance to current inhabitants.
Yours faithfully,
SalehiSubmitted by salehi19862 on
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- although
- even though
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