Some people say that popular TV entertainment programs should aim to educate viewers about some social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to
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social problems. In
fact
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,fact

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I completely
agrees
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with
this
statement because it will spread
the
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awarness
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awareness

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about family planning and helps to curb the
deadily
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deadly

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diseases.
First
of all, entertainment shows
brings
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the
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awareness among the
people
regarding family planning.
This
is because
majority
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the majority
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of the
people
watch TV to enjoy their favourite shows. If
such
shows will focus on the issues
such
as family planning,
people
will
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understand

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more and adopt
the
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methods which they do not understand
othewise
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otherwise

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.
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, it will lead to
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the issue of
growing
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a growing
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population
.
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, in china
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popular

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shows
in
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on

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national
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channel
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channels

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foccused
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focused

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more on the issue of expanding
population
.
Such
shows proved
successfull
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successful

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and brought
a
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population
of china in control by making citizens more
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responsible
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and adopting a single child policy.
Therefore
, famous leisure shows on television
plays
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a crucial role in addressing
the
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social issues.
Additionally
, these days healths disorders related to tobacco
cunsumption
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consumption

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such
as oral
cancer
are on
surge
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the surge

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. The
goverment
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government

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should telecast shows related to
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spread
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of
cancer
and
it's
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its

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the implication
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implication
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implications

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,
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so that it will deter
the
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smokers from smoking and it will decline the rate of oral
cancer
.
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in India, most
of
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apply

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the famous dramas and movies
spreads
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educational awareness regarding
the
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cancer
by displaying the
messsage
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message

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"quit smoking before
its
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too late".
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,
people
think's
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think

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twice before smoking.
Thus
, telecasting
such
educational shows will address the
prevelance
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prevalence

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of
health related
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health-related

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disorders in society. In conclusion, I strongly agree that
televison
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television

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shows should educate the citizens regarding social problems. Not only it does help to control the
population
explosion, but it
also
does improve the
quaility
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quality

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of life among the individual.
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