An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think that this has brought people closer together while other things people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

over the recent decades,the influence of the computerized on human life is undeniable.

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folk hold the view that the cyber world,

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others think that it has limited the real-life interactions among people. from my ,perspective social publishing has done more good than bad. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

To begin

with, Nowadays more citizens are busy using mobile phones and wasting time on social media to see

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videos and images and it makes peers ignore their surroundings ,parents,friends and relatives and it leads to the loss of their value and respect.

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,teenagers spend too much time on the net to interact with other countries and they are following their habits or practice traditions that are not acceptable

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their own religion and social values.

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instance,we have seen some couples going to

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restaurant

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sitting together and ignoring each other and engaging with their smartphones

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communicate with each other.

Due to

these drawbacks of the cyber world, it is comprehensive that many nations hold prejudiced views towards online networks.

on the other hand

, social media sites help the public to have friends from different countries

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are living in different circumstances

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learn about other cultures and practise foreign languages.

In addition

,peers having similar interests can share their viewpoints and learn from each other.

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,they get a lot of job opportunities in social publishing applications.

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, software developers share their experiences with each other on the computerized.

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is a lot of useful information are there on the internet. In conclusion, online information highway sites give more benefits than disadvantages.

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my opinion if you use a good way there is more useful information

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available on the internet.