Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether
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internet
is harmful and Add an article
the internet
cause
many problems Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
on
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for
people
. Use synonyms
Although
I accept that using the Linking Words
internet
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harbors
some positive implications Change the spelling
harbours
on
human beings, I mostly believe that Change preposition
for
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internet’s
negative sides Correct article usage
the internet’s
is
high than Change the verb form
are
positive
sides.
The main reason why I believe communication problems each other Correct article usage
the positive
people
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internet
. Spending time on the Use synonyms
internet
decrease social life and weakness Use synonyms
bond
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in bond
family
relatives. Change preposition
in family
For example
, in the past, when Linking Words
people
came to work, they spent time Use synonyms
family
, Change preposition
with family
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and friends
friends
and went to Add the comma(s)
,friends
theatre
, Correct article usage
the theatre
cinema
and they socialized with each other. Nowadays Correct word choice
and cinema
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
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apply
the
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people
prefer surfing Use synonyms
on
the Change preposition
apply
internet
in their spare time and watching Use synonyms
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a movie
movie
on Fix the agreement mistake
movies
the
Netflix, Correct article usage
apply
theatre
on Fix the agreement mistake
theatres
the
YouTube and so on. Correct article usage
apply
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,
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to, see
see
each other, they do not meet. Only they talk via Correct word choice
and see
on
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apply
the
skype, YouTube and so on.
Another reason why I support the notion that Correct article usage
apply
people
are being impacted negatively is Use synonyms
that
increasing depression rate. Correct determiner usage
the
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camouflage Use synonyms
truth
in their life and show everything is ideal on Correct article usage
the truth
the
social account. Change the word
their
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lies Correct pronoun usage
These
cause
depression Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
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in the
the
minority of the Correct article usage
a
people
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Furthermore
, many apps on the Linking Words
internet
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creates
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create
propensity
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a propensity
of
the expense Change preposition
for
money
. Change preposition
of money
For instance
, many games Linking Words
which
have Correct pronoun usage
apply
month
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monthly
subscription
. Fix the agreement mistake
subscriptions
However
, there are useful apps that help to cultivate language and digital skills at a reasonable price. If Linking Words
people
want to obtain these skills in the offline course, they spend more money than online apps.
In conclusion, I hold the view that Use synonyms
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internet
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the internet
generate
serious problems Change the verb form
generates
on
society and Change preposition
in
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the intelligent
intelligent
level is might Replace the word
intelligence
decreased
by the Change the verb form
decrease
be decreased
internet
and Use synonyms
problem solve
not only Add a hyphen
problem-solve
the
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also
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