You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • tell him which team won • describe the conditions on the day • say how you felt about the match Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .........,

Dear John, Hope you feel better after the car accident which happened on Saturday. I'm writing to share with you exciting news about our weekend football match. I'm extremely happy to tell you that our team won that final match! It was a hard and aggressive game, but we'd managed to score a goal before the referee blew the
last
whistle.
Although
the weather was terrible: it was raining heavily during the whole day, the stadium was flooded with local funs. Luckily, many of them cheered our team. All of us were over the moon about our great achievement.
However
, for sure, we missed you a lot, as you are the best goalkeeper ever. Wish you a speedy recovery, and hope to see you soon. All the best, Maria
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heartfelt concern
  • vicarious victory
  • grueling match
  • unyielding spirit
  • team cohesion
  • adverse weather conditions
  • sense of camaraderie
  • indomitable spirit
  • speedy recovery
  • anticipation for your return
  • atmospheric tension
  • overwhelming support
  • strategic triumph
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