Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.* To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that international higher cost . As a the separation of very popular historical place in Uganda, it is visited by thousands of international
tourist
should be Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
charge
Wrong verb form
charged
more free
when they visit cultural and Replace the words
freer
Correct your spelling
historical
hist orical
attractions than local residents . I broadly do not agree with Correct your spelling
historical
this
motion owing
the fact that if the state Add the preposition
toowing
increase
ticket price for onlyCorrect subject-verb agreement
increases
Replace the word
foreign
foreigners
tourist
,there will be decline
in Add an article
a decline
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
tourist
, and Change to a plural noun
tourists
also
it will ,
make Remove the comma
apply
foreigners
feels
discriminatedChange the verb form
feel
.
Change preposition
against.
First
and foremost , if the government increases tickets fee for tourist
, the number of international tourists will go down . Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
This
is because most of
the international Change preposition
apply
visitors
wont
afford to gather forAdd an apostrophe
won't
Add an article
a
the
results
Correct the article-noun agreement
result
Add a comma
,
countries
economy will be affected negatively since income brought by Change noun form
country's
foreigners
to the state will reduced
. To illustrate , In 2020 ,the Kenyan authorities passed a law that international Change the verb form
reduce
be reduced
tourist
visiting any historical site should be charged Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
double
rate , since Correct article usage
a double
then
the number of tourist
vising Kenya has dropped drastically. Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Hence
,fall
of Correct article usage
the fall
Kenyan
economy. Add an article
the Kenyan
Therefore
, charging foreign visitors
extra money from
what the Change preposition
than
locals
Fix the agreement mistake
local
visitors
pay will lead to reduction
of international Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
visitors
visiting cultural and historical sites .
secondly
, international travellers have a right to be treated equally as local visitors
when it comes to payment for touring both historical and cultural places.It is based on the fact that whatever is displayed in the historical and cultural sites is the same for everyone . Hence
,Correct article usage
the
visitors
in terms of nationality in my opinion is an act of racial discrimination. For instance
, Amboseli
Correct article usage
the Amboseli
museam
isCorrect your spelling
museum
Add an article
a
visitors
every year. However
, there was an article published by one of the foreigner
who had visited Change to a plural noun
foreigners
Amboseli
museum complaining of how the Correct article usage
the Amboseli
foreigners
were discriminate
Wrong verb form
discriminated
by
making them Change preposition
against by
to
pay double rates for visiting the same museum visited by indigenous tourists who Change the verb form
apply
payed
Correct your spelling
paid
cheaper
Correct article usage
a cheaper
fee
. Fix the agreement mistake
fees
Thus
, racial discrimination should be discouraged when it comes to charging fee
Fix the agreement mistake
fees
Correct your spelling
for
fo
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for
the
Correct article usage
apply
foreigners
.
In summary , in my view , tourists and local visitors
should pay same
amount of money to visit cultural and historical places considering the fact that if Change the article
the same
foreigners
are charged more than local
it will discourage them from visiting the sites as well as making them feel discriminated.Fix the agreement mistake
locals
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