Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.* To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed that international
tourist
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should be
charge
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more free
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when they visit cultural and
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historical
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hist orical
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historical
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attractions than local residents . I broadly do not agree with
this
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owing
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the fact that if the state
increase
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ticket price for only
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foreigners
tourist
,there will be
decline
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in
number
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of
tourist
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, and
also
it will
,
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make
foreigners
feels
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discriminated
.
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First
and foremost , if the government increases tickets fee for
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, the number of international tourists will go down .
This
is because most
of
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the international
visitors
wont
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afford to gather for
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higher cost . As a
results
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the
countries
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economy will be affected negatively since income brought by
foreigners
to the state will
reduced
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. To illustrate , In 2020 ,the Kenyan authorities passed a law that international
tourist
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visiting any historical site should be charged
double
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rate , since
then
the number of
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vising Kenya has dropped drastically.
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,
fall
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of
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economy.
Therefore
, charging foreign
visitors
extra money
from
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what the
locals
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visitors
pay will lead to
reduction
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a reduction
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of international
visitors
visiting cultural and historical sites .
secondly
, international travellers have a right to be treated equally as local
visitors
when it comes to payment for touring both historical and cultural places.It is based on the fact that whatever is displayed in the historical and cultural sites is the same for everyone .
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separation of
visitors
in terms of nationality in my opinion is an act of racial discrimination.
For instance
,
Amboseli
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museam
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museum
is
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very popular historical place in Uganda, it is visited by thousands of international
visitors
every year.
However
, there was an article published by one of the
foreigner
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who had visited
Amboseli
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museum complaining of how the
foreigners
were
discriminate
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by
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making them
to
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pay double rates for visiting the same museum visited by indigenous tourists who
payed
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paid
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cheaper
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a cheaper
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fee
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.
Thus
, racial discrimination should be discouraged when it comes to charging
fee
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fo
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the
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foreigners
. In summary , in my view , tourists and local
visitors
should pay
same
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amount of money to visit cultural and historical places considering the fact that if
foreigners
are charged more than
local
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locals
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it will discourage them from visiting the sites as well as making them feel discriminated.
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